- I feel it needs a bit more Lost World, without altering too much the image into a gag like Jurassic Park.
- I want the colour storm to be more present in the foreground.
-And more but I am not sure what it is.
If anyone has any advice my ears are open.
I still need to find a way to include a deer in there, as I feel he is essential symbolically to the piece.
I have a feeling I should go more towards the turquoise and salmon pink of my earlier concept, though I am not too sure yet, probably of mix of the two sets, red-blue turqoise-salmon pink, would be preferable.
Their are more variations in the colours, which makes this piece chromatically more pleasing to my eye.