My main issue is the perspective and the view. I want it to be more dramatic, with a more drastic angle. I need to do more drawings to find it, using the thumbnails.
So here is some work in progress, made during the photoshop class. I need to add more detail to enhance scale, which is really a reoccurring problem.
This is one representing a weird foggy river. I still need to add the expedition to show the scale. I want them to be paddling in through the low fog.
The second one still needs a lot of detailing. It needs to be cleaned. I added the characters to try and get scale though they are by no mean final.
When I will include the characters they will be a bit more detailed and have some colour on them, though they will still remain a secondary aspect of the painting and therefore will be more implied than detailed.